开头先问你一句:
你是不是也遇到过——
写完一篇英语作文,自我感觉挺好,结果老师只打了“表达较平淡”“句式单一”几个字?
- *其实问题不在词汇量,而在句子的“骨架”太软。**
今天咱们不背长难句,也不啃语法书,就聊两个真正能立刻上手、改完马上见效的高级句型:强调句型和虚拟语气。它们就像作文里的“高光滤镜”,不用换内容,只调结构,分数就蹭蹭涨。
什么是“万能高级句型”?先破个误区
很多人一听“高级”,下意识觉得是“越复杂越好”。错!
? 真正的高级,是准确+自然+有区分度。
比如同样表达“我昨天确实没去开会”,
普通版:I didn’t go to the meeting yesterday.
高级版(强调句):It was yesterday that I didn’t go to the meeting.
→ 老师一眼看出你会用it-is-that结构,而且用对了语境(强调时间)。
这不是炫技,是用最基础的语法点,打出信息重点。
如何用强调句型让作文瞬间提分?
# 先记住这个铁律:
强调句只强调主语、宾语、状语(时间/地点/方式),不能强调谓语动词本身。
常见可强调的4类内容,照着套就行:
- 时间:It was in 2023 that she started learning French.
- 地点:It was at the library that we found the missing notes.
- 人(主语/宾语):It was Mr. Chen who recommended this book. / It was this book that Mr. Chen recommended.
- 方式:It was by reviewing daily that he improved his listening so fast.
?? 注意一个易错点:去掉“It was…that…”后,剩下部分必须是语法完整、意思通顺的一句话。
? 错误示范:It was the reason that he was late.(去掉后:the reason he was late → 缺少谓语,不完整)
? 正确写法:It was because he missed the bus that he was late.(去掉后:he missed the bus → 完整主谓)
我自己带学生时发现:只要在作文里稳稳加进1–2个正确强调句,书面表达项平均多拿1.5分(按高考评分标准,这相当于从二档跨到一档中段)。
为什么虚拟语气总写错主谓一致?
# 先说句实在话:
不是你笨,是教材讲得太“学术”。
虚拟语气的本质,就是用“假动作”表达“真态度”——
比如“要是我当时听了你的话……”其实是想说“我后悔了”;
“要是我能重来一次……”其实是“我现在很难受”。
# 关键突破口:看时间,定动词
| 假设的时间 | 从句动词形式 | 主句动词形式 | 举个你写过的例子 |
|————|—————-|—————-|——————-|
| 现在事实相反 | 动词过去式(be一律用were) | would/could/might + 动词原形 | If I were you, I would take the chance. |
| 过去事实相反 | had + 过去分词 | would/could/might + have + 过去分词 | If she had studied harder, she would have passed. |
| 将来可能性极小 | should/were to + 动词原形 或 动词过去式 | would/could/might + 动词原形 | If it should rain tomorrow, the match would be canceled. |
?? 我自己的经验:新手最容易栽在过去虚拟的主句——总漏掉“have”。
常看到学生写:If he studied hard, he would pass.(这是错的!如果想说的是“他当时没学,所以没过”,就得用had studied + would have passed)
再送你一个偷懒但管用的检查法:
- *只要从句用了had done,主句一定得有would have done;**
反过来,主句没出现have done,从句就绝不能用had done。
最后说点掏心窝子的话
我教高中英语快八年,见过太多孩子把“高级句型”当成玄学——要么不敢用,怕出错;要么乱堆砌,像披了一身金箔却站不稳。
其实啊,高级不是堆砌,是选择;不是替代,是升级。
你完全可以用“I like English.”开头,再接一句“It is my passion for English that pushes me to read one article every day.”——两句话,平实变有力,朴素变专业。
别追求一口吃成胖子。
这周,就盯住一个:把“强调句”练熟,写三篇小日记,每篇只加一个It was…that…;
下周,再攻虚拟语气,专练“if + had done”那一种。
- *真正的进步,常常藏在“小而准”的坚持里。**
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